Thread: After the club

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<p>...i did the whole production</p>

yo i heard the track. It was ok..it definitely needs work. But good start if you want to have it as like a base or foundation per se. The vocals were a little unclear

<p>I REALLY CAN'T BELIEVE I'M GONNA SAY WHA I'M ABOUT TO SAY CONSIDERIN' I HATE AUTOTUNE, ALL THAT RON BROWZ CRAP (wit a few xceptions of course), ALL THAT LIL' WAYNE GARBAGE, ETC!</p>
<p>The track sounds like it wants to be somn'.&nbsp; I would definately revisit the synths in the hook.&nbsp; They could prolly do somn' different that would be more catchier for people to grasp.&nbsp; It almost sounds like u went the Flo Rida route wit them in his Shawty Got Lo joint.&nbsp; If that's wha u were goin' for, then work the sound out.&nbsp; However, I like the sound as is.&nbsp; I would just do somn' a lil' more fittin' to the track if that's the position its gonna play.&nbsp; Also, the track gotta BUMP!&nbsp; Work on gettin' the drums knockin' n then get the sounds in there where they need to be.&nbsp; As for the verses, u must be clear on them.&nbsp; If its your mic, make the best of it or work on gettin' a better one.&nbsp; Eq your vox so they're clear n not real muddy or too&nbsp;sharp.&nbsp; The autotune (I'm gonna shoot myself for this) could prolly work if u did it like how Wayne does it.&nbsp; Some how, he manages to hold a key.&nbsp; That's wha u gotta do.&nbsp; I heard u there towards the end.&nbsp; I think that would make it more catchier for people to recite n take a likin' to.&nbsp; You weren't xactly on the key of the track, but it was on nonetheless in its own right.&nbsp; Stick to that format within the whole song n I think u wouldn't go wrong!&nbsp; It would actually win.</p>