Thread: New Dynamic Producer : Latest RnB track

<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>I am new to the family.</p>
<p>As an introduction, you can listen to the track I uploaded in here... (also here :http://www.zshare.net/audio/60641865cfd4c403/ )</p>
<p>Anyway, your opinions and advice are welcome, and you need some feedback in return, ofc I will provide you with it to the extent of my abilities... (and forget the corny comment to it, that's some marketing stuff I put there by habit)</p>
<p>Cya fam,</p>

<p>Whaddup mane, welcome to the fam!&nbsp; I'll just get right into it...</p>
<p>The track sounds dope, but there is definately room for improvement.&nbsp; I would definately do somn' more wit the build for the chorus.&nbsp; It just seemed like it stayed in one place.&nbsp; It has to move one way or another, n if the notes aren't changin' damn near every 8-16 bars, then another element needs to come in to break up the monotony.&nbsp; Its not always about havin' a huge production, but sometimes the simplest&nbsp;things can make a big difference.</p>
<p>The sounds are dope, but a couple of them need to be revisited in terms of notation.&nbsp; I hear the progression n its nice, but at a certain part it ends up not makin' any sense to me (just my ear talkin' to me).&nbsp; I also think it would be hot if u added a bridge to it... n for God sakes, please take the laugh out.&nbsp; I thought it was an idea for a song in mind n would happen in a couple spots in the song, but it was throughout the whole track... kinda got annoyin' after a while cause I just wanted to hear the track.&nbsp; N somewhere around 3 min. n change, u had some breaks in the track... I think this would work great in the verses (preferably the second).</p>
<p>Aside from alllat, the joint sounds dope to me!&nbsp; Keep up the good work mane!&nbsp; Hope to hear more soon!</p>

<p>Yeah I think I got you... actually I was hesitating between two progression... I think you got that... You must have a nice ear, you are the first one to actually see that...</p>
<p>Also, yeah, my arrangement needs some more work, I will try to improve on it...</p>
<p>Lastly the mix still a lil bit of tweaking agagin...</p>
<p>Thank you, I appreciate such a very good feed.</p>
<p>And I will definitely try to come with not only more but better </p>
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<p>Always mane!&nbsp; I think I got a pretty good ear considerin' I do a lot of engineerin' n I've heard a lot of hot joints.&nbsp; I wish I could've made some, as well as jack them for the track just so I can listen to it for my own personal enjoyment (some of them I have - lol)!</p>
<p>The progression blends nicely, its just towards the end that it gets a lil' confusin'.&nbsp; Clean that up n you're good money!&nbsp; I kno how the mix game goes, so as long as u get all the necessary&nbsp;elements for the track, you're straight.&nbsp; The mix&nbsp;should be the polish on everything!&nbsp;</p>